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The topic should be about a gym that is only for women in Saudi Arabia, put in your mind there are no gyms for women in Saudi Arabia, there gums only for men. Also, women can’t drive in Saudi Arabia, and maybe having a special driver in that gym could help.
2: Corrections & Rehabilitation
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: Template & Literature Review Instructions
For the IP4 assignment, you are “completing your final draft” by building upon what you’ve already completed in IP3. It is a two-step process, as follows:
1.FIRST: Make corrections that have already been identified in your IP3 paper – and then build upon it. IP4 is your final draft and this is your chance to edit it to perfection, fix errors and add written insight into your final paper. Here is an IP4 TEMPLATE for you to follow:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhS2Z6LVNZdmdieEU/view?usp=sharing
2.SECOND: Remove your annotated bibliography (aka applicable resources) from your paper and re-write it (or transform it) in narrative form (or in paragraph form) and then that will be your “literature review” for your paper. Your old annotated bibliography will be transformed into a literature review for your paper. Here are instructions on how to write a Literature Review:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhbncwX19RR3c2czQ/view?usp=sharing
If the links don’t work when you click on them, then please copy-and-paste them into your browser and they WILL work.
Using the feedback you received from your instructor and colleagues over the last few weeks, you will now revise your rough draft into your final research paper. As you revise, feel free to continue to expand your paper by adding additional supporting evidence and analysis where you see a need. Have you incorporated the information related to technology, corrections, and any theories or policies related to the issue you are researching?
Your final draft must be no less than 4 pages, not including the reference page. It must be longer and more refined than your Unit 3 Individual Project. This paper must follow APA style format, and include in-text citations and a reference page. Be sure to proofread your final paper and run the spell and grammar checkers before submitting.
**** The instructor feedback on the paper listed below *****
It would have helped to organize the paper with proper subtitles. Here is the template that was provided:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhNWNwelJOZFJ2S00/view?usp=sharing (2 points).
The research proposal is missing a hypothesis, although there is a facsimile of one. Writing a hypothesis is a process:
(1) First, identify what the problem is.
(2) Second, make an educated guess as to what the relationship is between variables (issues).
(3) Third, create a hypothesis (which is explained below).
A hypothesis will compare ideas. For example, a hypothesis can be written like this:
“If [this is done], then [this will happen].”
This is a simple prediction. As an example:
“If [a water spigot is turned on], then [water will come out of the facet].”
As an example in Criminal Justice:
“If [drug addicts receive treatment], then [they are less likely to commit burglaries].”
Fill in the blanks with the information from your own proposed experiment. Notice that these statements contain the words: if and then. They are necessary in a formal hypothesis. In a formalized hypothesis, a tentative relationship is stated or an educated guess is stated. Your hypothesis should be something that you can test. It’s called a testable hypothesis. In other words, you need to be able to measure “what is done” and “what will happen next.” Here are two good websites that describes how to write a hypothesis: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhdU9JWTZDSjNWZms/view?usp=sharing (3 point).
The assignment requires the completion of an annotated bibliography (aka applicable resources), but there is none in the paper, although there is a facsimile of one. An annotated bibliography will first list an article (reference it APA style). Then under the APA listing, it should have a short description of what the article is about, usually anywhere from 3-8 sentences long (the description is like an abstract). If you want to see an annotated bibliography, then please visit the following website link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0QmECZPnLPhcWdNbVNSczBvSUU/view?usp=sharing (5 points).
There was no measurement and analysis section in the paper to show or discuss specific research methodologies to determine how information (or data) will be collected and then analyzed in your draft research proposal (or in your research paper). Exactly what data will be collected and how will it be collected? A measurement and analysis section needs to explain to a reader why a particular “measurement analysis” is good and exactly how it will be applied to the specific information in your paper. It should explain how or why that methodology will help to answer proposed research questions. (3 points).
This assignment produced a rough draft of the body of a proposed research paper. It presented a clear focus on the problems and provided a tentative solution. The references were acceptable scholarly sources as support of the ideas that were presented. As required, it presented an introduction to the problem that was followed by bodies of paragraphs that focused on the students analysis of the situation (with key points appropriately noted). In theory, this would continue to be modified over a longer period of time that is generally not available in undergraduate studies. This is an introductory rough draft to a proposed problem that is worth investigating.
2: Costa environmental issues
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Best with some pictures in presentation, include competitive analysis, caputring knowledge, knowledge management system and factors affecting knowledge management.
Corrections & Rehabilitation