ALLIED ENG160 MODULE 2 and module 3 discussions

mod 2 Using
what you’ve learned in Module 2, write the introductory paragraph
(including a thesis statement) for an essay you might write about “Your
Educational Experience.”
When commenting on your fellow students’ posts, try to give one piece of constructive advice towards improving the paragraph.
.allied.edu/Images/1×1.gif”>mod 3 .allied.edu/Images/1×1.gif”> Posted by Lacey Walswick at 05/28/13 09:20 PM Describe one of the following in a paragraph or two using sensory imagery:
a) a restaurant and/or meal you know well
b) the interior of your car (or other transportation you frequent)
c) your backyard or other outdoor space
In
your responses to each other tell the author what you would have liked
more of. What would make the scene more vivid to you as a reader?